Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st story)
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Re: My first written story (gay, medical latex gloves, bonda
Yes! Finally got around to reading it!
Nice story, Jake! I especially enjoyed the last two parts. And I have a feeling you enjoyed writing it very much yourself as well.
I think perhaps why no one has responded yet, is because most people aren't into gay stuff, and the ones that are might not check the story section often, as there's not much gay ones anyway. I changed the title. Perhaps some more will read it then.
Did you ever get a response from the guy you wrote it for?
Nice story, Jake! I especially enjoyed the last two parts. And I have a feeling you enjoyed writing it very much yourself as well.
I think perhaps why no one has responded yet, is because most people aren't into gay stuff, and the ones that are might not check the story section often, as there's not much gay ones anyway. I changed the title. Perhaps some more will read it then.
Did you ever get a response from the guy you wrote it for?
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Re: My first written story (gay, medical latex gloves, bonda
I did indeed, he loved it :P
I guess you're right, nobody likes dem gays. Hehe.
I'll probably never write a heterosexual story though, 'cos I have like zilch experience.
I guess you're right, nobody likes dem gays. Hehe.
I'll probably never write a heterosexual story though, 'cos I have like zilch experience.
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
Good story Jake!! especially if it was a first try
so perhaps we can hear about how at their next meeting Jake pulls out a pair of smooth snug surgical rubber gloves with long cuffs,...
so perhaps we can hear about how at their next meeting Jake pulls out a pair of smooth snug surgical rubber gloves with long cuffs,...
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
Hey Jake! I'm gonna start by saying I'm 100% hetero. That said, your story is quite good. I read parts 1,2 and the last part. While I can't speak about how good this is for a gay guy, I will comment about it as a fetish piece.
I really like how you focus on the sexual aspect such as when Tyler's told to give oral sex with the promise of wearing the gloves. I'm not too into BDSM, but if it were a woman in control it would work well. I'd say you could improve it with a little more intensity at that point. Have a little more provocative dialogue with Jake wanting more. I've never had oral sex (or regular for that matter) but if he was a little more demanding leading up to the climax, the "explosion" would be more satisfying.
Something else I liked was how you remain in control up to the bedroom scene. You didn't just go "gloves, gloves, gloves!" and call it a story. You drip feed the fetish into the story.
The last thing I'd like to ask: How old are these guys?" I didn't read the full story, but that's something that should said in the store.
I really like how you focus on the sexual aspect such as when Tyler's told to give oral sex with the promise of wearing the gloves. I'm not too into BDSM, but if it were a woman in control it would work well. I'd say you could improve it with a little more intensity at that point. Have a little more provocative dialogue with Jake wanting more. I've never had oral sex (or regular for that matter) but if he was a little more demanding leading up to the climax, the "explosion" would be more satisfying.
Something else I liked was how you remain in control up to the bedroom scene. You didn't just go "gloves, gloves, gloves!" and call it a story. You drip feed the fetish into the story.
The last thing I'd like to ask: How old are these guys?" I didn't read the full story, but that's something that should said in the store.
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
I never saw these two replies before! Yay!
As for their ages, I believe my plan was for them to both be 19 years old.
I would love to write about that Right up my street!r957 wrote:Good story Jake!! especially if it was a first try
so perhaps we can hear about how at their next meeting Jake pulls out a pair of smooth snug surgical rubber gloves with long cuffs,...
As for their ages, I believe my plan was for them to both be 19 years old.
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
Hey Jake
Your story was awesome. I loved every bit of it and am looking forward to more.
There are many Gay Glove Fetishists out there the more content available for them the more reaction you can expect.
I also love log cuff tight gloves and look forward to more of your writing hoping it includes this......
Your story was awesome. I loved every bit of it and am looking forward to more.
There are many Gay Glove Fetishists out there the more content available for them the more reaction you can expect.
I also love log cuff tight gloves and look forward to more of your writing hoping it includes this......
Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
Jake, your ability to write a story is excellent. I have trawled the internet for pretty much every glove fetish story out there (hetero or homo) but yours is much more believable and enjoyable than most. Bravo, bravissimo!
Everyone's a freak in one way or another - it's how much and how you choose to express it that counts. As long as it harms no-one (unless that's their preference, of course) then who are we to judge?
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
Oh lovely, thank you for that glovestud and Grim
Much appreciated!
Tight things have always appealed to me and I usually write in what appeals to me and what I'll think others will like, so you can definitely expect to see more of that if I write another!
Much appreciated!
Tight things have always appealed to me and I usually write in what appeals to me and what I'll think others will like, so you can definitely expect to see more of that if I write another!
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
This story is great. I can almost see it. Kudos Jake
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Re: Gay fellas with medical latex gloves, bondage (my 1st st
this is an amazing story Jake i wish that happened to me xx