Story triptych: La Mireia (complete)

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Story triptych: La Mireia (complete)

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Story triptych: La Mireia — Part 1

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Another great story by the great JaneyE. I'm always impressed by your world-building and vivid scenery descriptions. And it goes without saying the main course of red leather gloves and rubber gloves was very satisfying. Looking forward to the next installment!
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Great Story JaneyE. Have you been to Spain? Only thing I would change is the POV character, he's unlikable.
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dopefish wrote: Mon May 09, 2022 2:31 pm ... the POV character, he's unlikable.
:lol: Yeah, I don't like him very much either. But I hope you could enjoy the story in spite of that.

And don't worry. The next story has a different narrator, hopefully very likeable.
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very sexy and hot story ! thank you again Janey!
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As always, great job Janey. An interesting idea with a storytelling form, first was Olivier, then there will be Mireia or Valentina. Mirea's description at the conference reminded me of an old video on YT Could it be an inspiration?
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violet666 wrote: Tue May 10, 2022 10:34 pm ... Could it be an inspiration?
Busted! :lol:

“I have stolen ideas from every book I have ever read. My principle in researching a novel is ‘Read like a butterfly, write like a bee’, and if this story contains any honey, it is entirely because of the quality of the nectar I found in the work of better writers.”
--Philip Pullman

And I also steal ideas from real life. Not apologising.
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Story triptych: La Mireia — Part 2

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excellent story again!!! even though i am not into smoking, i do wish there is such a glove castle website !!
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