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Story triptych: La Mireia (complete)

Posted: Sun May 08, 2022 10:51 pm
by JaneyE

Story triptych: La Mireia — Part 1

Posted: Sun May 08, 2022 10:51 pm
by JaneyE

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Mon May 09, 2022 12:10 pm
by Someguy
Another great story by the great JaneyE. I'm always impressed by your world-building and vivid scenery descriptions. And it goes without saying the main course of red leather gloves and rubber gloves was very satisfying. Looking forward to the next installment!

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Mon May 09, 2022 2:31 pm
by dopefish
Great Story JaneyE. Have you been to Spain? Only thing I would change is the POV character, he's unlikable.

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Mon May 09, 2022 3:05 pm
by JaneyE
dopefish wrote: Mon May 09, 2022 2:31 pm ... the POV character, he's unlikable.
:lol: Yeah, I don't like him very much either. But I hope you could enjoy the story in spite of that.

And don't worry. The next story has a different narrator, hopefully very likeable.

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Tue May 10, 2022 1:58 am
by sims
very sexy and hot story ! thank you again Janey!

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Tue May 10, 2022 10:34 pm
by violet666
As always, great job Janey. An interesting idea with a storytelling form, first was Olivier, then there will be Mireia or Valentina. Mirea's description at the conference reminded me of an old video on YT Could it be an inspiration?

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia

Posted: Wed May 11, 2022 6:46 am
by JaneyE
violet666 wrote: Tue May 10, 2022 10:34 pm ... Could it be an inspiration?
Busted! :lol:

“I have stolen ideas from every book I have ever read. My principle in researching a novel is ‘Read like a butterfly, write like a bee’, and if this story contains any honey, it is entirely because of the quality of the nectar I found in the work of better writers.”
--Philip Pullman

And I also steal ideas from real life. Not apologising.

Story triptych: La Mireia — Part 2

Posted: Sun May 15, 2022 12:19 am
by JaneyE

Re: Story triptych: La Mireia (new: Part 2)

Posted: Sun May 15, 2022 12:31 pm
by sims
excellent story again!!! even though i am not into smoking, i do wish there is such a glove castle website !!